“On my island there is mountain and clean ocean beautiful forest and hill but they have no name.”
“On my island is big mountain and forest. It’s fun. The tree is tall. Its river is blue. beautiful!! wow!”
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Tagged as pohang, students, teaching
What level are your students? (grade)
Elementary school, 5th and 6th grade. These were by 5th graders. I know they’re not great students, but I try to make them write (creatively and not just spit back stuff learned rote) as much as possible.
Lovely! I like the drawings especially, but the text is fun as well. I wonder why the places have no name, in the first example.
Because the student didn’t want to write anymore English…
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